dude
dont knock your vocals you do a pretty wicked scream bro and your low tone vocals are gr8 except about at 1:41 doesnt sound so hot but its not to bad either
This is purely an EXPERIMENTAL song all around. That means it's supposed to sound the way it does, with the exception of the vocals. (I know the vocals suck, you don't have to tell me.) I don't usually sing, since I really hate my singing voice, but here you go. This is absolutely nothing fancy. If you enjoy it then good, but if you don't then whatever. Enough with this paragraph, here's the lyrics if you're interested:
She promised me a prize
How dare you try to disguise
The future we all know
Demand and conquer all
And how you make it fall
Even your own light despises you
Death is a given
But life is not a right
I'm trusting you to guide me through the night
Hope is forsaken
Here's hoping I'll make it
Back to me, to myself for you
Wake me up
Before the storm ends
I want to see
My own reflection again
Do I fear you
Or do I fear myself
I need to know
I want to know
Death is a given
But life is not a right
I'm trusting you to guide me through the night
The truth is
I fear Hell
And death
And anything else
That would keep me from you
I don't want to lose
What my heart
Has fought so hard to keep
Please don't leave
I'm all alone
dude
dont knock your vocals you do a pretty wicked scream bro and your low tone vocals are gr8 except about at 1:41 doesnt sound so hot but its not to bad either
Yeah, I don't know what happened with the vocals there. I think I was just forcing it too much. Oh well. Thanks for the score!
Very good!
Very interesting song.
I like experimental songs and this one is a good one!
You have a good voice and it fits the song very well.
Gives it a evil feeling.
Loved the guitar part at 0:53.
A the ending 2:30 to 3:30 was my favorite part, it is awesome!
Overall a great song!
5/5
Thanks a lot for the awesome score and the review! Maybe I'm just too harsh on myself about my vocals...
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This has a nice flow to it.Did you sing this yourself?
Yep, that's why the vocals aren't that great. But thanks a lot for the 10!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.