Hmmm....
When i heard the percussion first come in I was hoping that it would continue throughout similar, but then it sped up. Up until :55 I liked the percussion, it wasn't straightforward which is good, I feel as though the beat afterward just becomes to bland especially when the beat at 1:17 starts up.
The drum part that comes up and plays at 2:01-3:07 is nice at first, but could use some more variety.
3:18-3:31 sounded like it could have been cool, but then it returns to a similar beat from 1:17
It has some interesting parts to it, but i feel it could use more. Slow down some of the parts, and or make sure the beats have some space between them so that it's not just a straightforward thing. Hope this helps a little.=3
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