Quoting Coop "Simple and...weird"

yes, its definetely different. One sound melodies don't normally become so popular. The melody u used is also quite simple and it didn't have that much of a varied feel to it

However, this would work really well as a background instrument so all u need is a few drums, several more isntruments a few lessons in harmony and voila. U got urself a piece of good music.

Overall, its a good piece but it definetely needs more work.

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Simple and... weird

Well, it's different, I can say that at least. I think that the idea of using one sound to progress the track is a novel idea, with the way that things seem to move forward.

It's almost as if you seem to be working towards making this into a track in it's own right, bringing in other instruments and so forth into the track, but you lacked the confidence to do that. Take that step and make it a part of the tune, as opposed to making this sound the whole tune.

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Well you made an attempt at least

But unfortunately it falls short with the timing of the notes being used. Single out the sounds more and make sure to time the notes better.

It's random enough for me not to score it a bit lower, but yeah it could use a lot more work, and sadly I don't know what else i could say about it, there isn't much for my brain to try and process. Keep up the work, you'll do fine. =3

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Creative idea, but somehow empty...

This does get a little annoying, and I don't see why, from all things, you use FL's opening blip, but yeah, it's creative, and it's what gave you the majority of your points.

Melodies were OK; they got a little monotonous at the beginning, but the closer the song got to the end, the better the melodies became. Your use of the blip was quite creative, but at 0:05, the blip you used in the background got a little annoying, so maybe instead of doing it once every beat, do it once every four beats at the beginning.

Transitions throughout the song were nothing too special, and I quickly lost the rythm of the song. I think you should make simpler melodies, since by using two melodies at the same time being played by one sound makes the song sound cluttered and complicated.

Intro, as Haggard said, was nothing too special. What I think would be better is if you made an awesomely catchy melody play first, and then it gets a little more complicated. The ending was a little wierd, but it would've been OK if you added more silence to the end.

You could try adding some drums over here, just to add a little more rythm, or maybe you can use the default drums of FL Studio to make the song sound more FL-ish :P.

Creative idea, but it wasn't performed to it's best. Using one sound only to make a song isn't the easiest to work with; maybe you can try other sound packs (you already tried Windows...). Still, you have a creative idea going on, just work on it a little more.
6/10
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Interesting

At first I thought: "Wow, wtf is that supposed to be?", then I read your comment and I was like: "Oh... that's interesting."

It's a pretty good effort actually, you come up with a pretty good melody after the somewhat boring intro. But on the other hand you are very limited with the sounds you can create if you only use fl's opening sound as a basis. ^^

Normally I advise artists to try and create longer songs, but I don't think you could lengthen this without getting too repititve. The only chance I see to add more parts to this is to use other sounds as well. But then the whole idea of the song would be lost.

So, overall this is a very nice submission and quite original. I mean, I've heard windows sounds quite often now, but I didn't hear anything like this where the author only used one base sound for the entire song.

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