Very Good. That's all I can say.
I love it. It's very good, and I might use it some day. The only flaw is It's a bit choppy, I'd try to make it flow a bit more, but other than that it's good.
Before there was man, existed the age of the gods also known as the Elohiem who among great beasts..created men onto their own likelyness, so they would be productive and easy to administrate. Each of these gods had sons, and their sons begotted the daughters of man creating the seraphim among wich were those who were tainted and foul.
These seraphim deserved to be placed into the pit of the earth, the underworld.
However these seraphim were not actually foul, they had merely brought the knowledge of the gods upon man releasing them from their slavery and aided in secret by one of the very highest gods enki the morning star, who took seat as king of the earth and was praised upon called Nebuchadnezzar.
The gods could not bare this for it meant an end to their luxioury, yet also feared the potential threat to their very life...and made a plan to destroy both the seraphim and man by flooding the earth, however Nebuchadnezzar also recieved these plans and instructed man to take the necaserry precautions whilst he would do battle.
Nebuchadnezzar lost and was cast into underworld.
In The time crafter® ;
Barheire, also known as the dark god of justice reigned as the keyholder of underworld. Installed by, he would let no man or beast in or out without the approval of An ruerim, the highest god of the heavenly law.
But he was also a being of extreme pride and arrogance grown from his position, wich would lead him to accept a challenge for release by Nebuchadnezzar. Being defeated .. An ruerim himself had to get into the picture to stop Nebuchadnezzars attempt of escape. Ultimately, back in custody Nebuchadnezzar spended his years in Barheire's personal domain as punishment to both.
And thus concludes the indepth on Barheire.
Very Good. That's all I can say.
I love it. It's very good, and I might use it some day. The only flaw is It's a bit choppy, I'd try to make it flow a bit more, but other than that it's good.
Well its part of a album so it has its own style.
Thanks for your review, glad you liked it. :)
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