Truly a short loop.
I know it's a loop and all, but I know you could improve this. Maybe lengthen the it a bit. It's all right for a loop. But that's just it. I know you can make a full length song. (At least 2:00)
I've seen some of your loops and I think they are all pretty good. But I think you could go for something much higher.
True, it might take some time. But you'll have pride in what you will soon create. I am sure with some time you can make a pretty decent song.
Anywho, this loop has a nice little beat going on. Probably my most favorite part of the song would have to be that animal/creature that makes the noise at the begining of the loop.
I wish you the best of luck in your composing.
~Kevan