hmm

i prefer this to the freestyle mix but theyre both still great.

i just love this song it sounds soooo good
the effefcts n everythin are gerat and the voices arent annoyin like other songs that do similar stuff

Fantastic Work!

the rythm is well thought out throughout really, its overall great and there isnt much that i'd improve. Just a couple of things though:

The melody was blended togethere very well it got slightly discordant in some slight parts and that instruments whihc u used (which sounds like a windows sound btw) got slightly repetitive in certain areas.

Background was great but got slightly repetitive towards the end as the drum beat was just repeating itself basically. Maybe u could work on a more varied drum beat.

Overall however, its fantastic and i think it'd deserve high marks wherever it went ;)

Darklight17
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Fun

Though the octave instrument that starts up at :29 sounds a little funny without some sort of underlying baseline or some other kind of harmony to go along with it.

The vocal sounds help break the monotony, otherwise I don't think this song would have been very interesting.

It does have a good sound to it though, things fit together well, the beat is alright, but nothing majorly special. But that doesn't mean that it's bad because of this, just not quite as adventurous as it could be. =3

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Great vocal samples

I think that this is one of the best track that's come through the Audio Portal to date. It's a well rounded piece, that's got a nice pace, beat, melody and vocal samples all blended together in a very professional way. The sound isn't too harsh on the ears and I could just sit there listening to it over and over again.

If I did do anything about it, I wouldn't have faded out the vocal sample toward the end. The way that the sounds are set out, it reminds me more of Flight of the Navigator, on the balance that it's more modern than Close Encounters, but the sound is sci-fi enough to warrant the films of the 70s and 80s that seemed to define a generation.

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Good

I like the vocal samples you used throughout the song. They are a very nice addition and they fit pretty well into the song. Also otherwise the song might be a bit boring, as there seems to be nothing that stands out too much.

Don't get me wrong, I don't think this song is bad, it just seems to keep itself in the background a little bit too much for my liking.
Also one of the instruments you used sounds a bit strange (that one that starts at 0:29). To me it somehow sounds a bit "carribean" and it destroys a bit the nice extra terrestrian atmosphere you manage to create with the other sounds.

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