Dude!

The pad is still a little high on this one, volume wise, needs a little dimming down, but it still sounds amazing! what pad is that?!

Glad to see the beat is a little louder! the Pad still drowns a lot of the sound out...

It is getting much better! Ah a melody switch up! very nice ^_^

This is really awesome, the beat was more full and developed nicely int he over all song, very awesome. Beat = 10/10

The only problem with the pad was it was too high and drowned a lot of the song out, but the background instruments and harmony pieces were very nice! Pad and Background = 8/10

The melody instrument was too quiet, or drowned by the pad, but it was very well constructed and flowed very nicely through the entire song. Melody =10/10

Length is a little short, but because its still in the working phase I don't see a problem with it. Length 9/10

Over all I have to say 9.7/10

Work on the pad a little, and length, should be about 3:40 long with how good this is!

Very nice man!