To short with the build-up

And i know you probably don't want to continue it from what i see in the other review. But i just wanted to give a short review on this, since i found this at random. So here is the actual "Review":

It's very calming, though maybe a little to quiet at the beginning, i know it was the effect you where going for, but maybe bringing it out a bit more would be nice. Also it could use a bit more of a dynamic boost when the main part comes in.

Hmmm

Weird intro. It could continue into a pretty decent song though, I guess.