Hmm...

That part at the start where she says look at me is off tune :|

And with your piano there were a couple bad notes that bcame really stacatto and stabby, but overall, pretty sweet.

That part where it went to 4/3 time was awesome, but when you added the transition out with the beat it sounded really weird.. :P

The part right after that was amazingly cool :P

Your beat was pretty wicked too :D

I agree with nanyt on the repetitiveness part. Not neccisarily the piano, but, yeah it was repetitive.

Tempo changes were awkward :P

Overall ratings:

Style: 9
Transitions: 6-7
Tune: 8
Chord prog: 9

8/10
4/5

Good job, man, you have potential!

very nice indeed

very well done the piano was great!

i still think it got very repetitive at some parts but over all nice :)

mind checking out my stuff to?