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Lyrics we ill.
It was just super slow and made me madd tired.
Lol.
Either way you did your thing.
Monk
Instrumental provided by ckc2009. Hope you all enjoy. This will be on the Redeem this City EP
EDIT: Dubs removed
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Lyrics we ill.
It was just super slow and made me madd tired.
Lol.
Either way you did your thing.
Monk
Ya, definitely a slower song. Glad you liked the lyrics
Context
I'm really diggin the lyrical content in this one. The flow is steady, but its a bit too slow for me to be fully engaged by it. The vocal levels seem to be a bit too loud, especially in the first part, I would drop them just a cunt hair. Also, are the vocals overdubbed throughout the whole song? If so, I dont like how it sounds. I think your tone matches the mood of this song, but the overpowering volume makes this difficult to get down with. Overall: Deep and relevant content, but too much voice (if that makes sense?)
Took out the dubs, that should fix most issues you had. Other than the speed of it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.