Oke...
Its oke, but its very simple.......
It has potential though
How long did you work on this by the way?
Cuzone said we should write songs for the piano solo. This is what I came up with. I'm looking forward to his piano song!
Love,
Timraband.
Oke...
Its oke, but its very simple.......
It has potential though
How long did you work on this by the way?
Maybe a day? Or half a day? :P
Feels empty
The song is a great concept. I like how it feels quite melodramatic. It's a shame that you constantly play the notes with the same time in between. Use the left hand to play chords or short rifs, instead of also pressing only one note. If you have to only play one note, play a different note in the same chord. So, if the right hand plays a C, play an E or F with the left hand (see what fits best). To keep the time in between the notes less even, just hold the left hand and sometimes hold the right hand. See what fits.
Rock on XD
nice, but needs a little work.
Since the title is 'Another Farewell', the music should be softer, not as harsh sounding, I suppose. Or maybe that's just me.
:)
thank you for the review! i made it harsh because the goodbye that is referenced in the title was rather harsh and sudden, and the pain I felt was manifested like that.
but i understand your critique and i agree that it needs some work. thank you. :)
amazing
amazing
hah thank you sir. i'm pleased that you like the song. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.