Painting by the light of the mind,
Right stars fill the darkness behind,
The light blows in,
on a current of air...
Your senses...
Drift...
out...
Eyes close...
Higher eye opens...
Colours shine,
then fade...
fade...
'till they are gone...
My first submitted song, all feedback is appreciated (good or bad). I'm new at this, i could use some info ^^
Beautiful...
Absolutely beautiful... It makes me think of a story. A story of a person who has over-come obstacles, tried their hardest, fought many battles, and still failed.
I could totally see this in a TV commercial.
Very, very good for a first submission!
Thank you very much :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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