I wrote this about my ex-fiancee, for her and our son. one of the hardest challenges i have ever faced was making my relationship into song, without lyrics to follow: i hope the music says what i had hoped and displays what i felt in my heart whilst i wrote this.
Chilling. Excellent,
This is excellent, I can feel this song, not just hear it. Everything was played out perfectly, and it fits what you're writing about perfectly. The best songs are the ones that you can just let flow, and you did that quite well. 10/10 5/5, excellent job.
Its really nice to hear that, i'm glad the song had the effect for others that it had for me.
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I love it. I can feel the emotions and everything. You have no need for lyrics when you are trying to get your feelings across. It's perfect. Great job
Thanks, i didnt even spend that long making it, i recorded the main part of the song live through midi all at once, and then added the solo line and over dubbed it.
But i think it needed to be that way, i think if i had put too much thought into it it wouldnt have turned out the way it is, i wrote it fromt he heart pretty much on the spot.
But thanks for the feedback i just hope she likes it as much as you did.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Johnnyoctane ![Mind Paradise [Purplerized]](https://aicon.ngfiles.com/1381/1381808_medium.webp?f1733695308)
