Great job

Great job but ... thats more a Electro song mate :p I know I might sound wierd but anyway nice

lfcofee said it best

I'll keep it short. This was pretty awesome, and experimental, and I loved it. Great job man, I liked it alot :) EQ work was really good, the bass is really heavy and deep and makes me smile, but you need a bit more variation. Zoom in there. These are all things coffee already said. hehe

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Much much better!!

This sounds alot better than "Eckhart's Project One" - it's a little more balanced out.

You definitely added some bass! It was a very different sounding piece - a little difficult to follow in some places - that's not a bad thing though - It ended rather abruptly but that's no big deal. I think it definitely shows progress and only in a few days too!

I voted 4 on this piece bringing it from 3.75 to 3.80

I'm not really sure how to classify this - seemed like a mix of a few different styles - but it's great that you're experimenting a bit.

I know you probably worked pretty hard on it - but I would recommend that you zoom way in - get in there and tweak stuff down as far as 32nd triplets or even 64th's. Try changing up things a little more here and there maybe instead of 2 repeating bars do 2 repeats then a 3rd with a minor variation - then 2 more and another variation again... Mix it up a bit!

Great work so far though, - You're obviously getting the hang of the software and judging the advances made from the other day I think that you'll be making some really awesome tracks very very soon.