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That's the loudness battle problem! It started in the 50s when people seemed to like louder tracks better on the radio. Its totally lame but oh well. I liked the melody a lot and you seem to have an interesting ASDR going on those instruments. The kick drum is really muffled but it seems intentional. I would like to hear the lead strings accentuated a little more but overall SOLID mate. Kudos, and cheers!