nice.

I like it. but reading the other reviews I agree with some especially this one.
Kicks and or percussion should be the foreground. especially the kick because it makes for an easy head bobbing appeal and foot tapping.

Just practice leveling everything.

good job tho. thanks for helping me out with the whole tempo thing in you kirby mix. I'll be sure to try out some house songs.

WOW

This was so soothing. I love it. Make a full song. PLZ!!!

Good, but could be better

I like the intro, although I think there a couple too many sounds playing at once for an intro. It should be more drawn out in the final version. I think that the bass line should be played longer by it self before the other main synths come in. You could turn up the bass line just a little bit as well. I like the melody when it comes in. Another thing I might change is the amount of sweep like Mystery Moon Pie said. It seems like when the bass beat and snares are played near each other that it plays two beats. I think I might just take out the snares because they conflict with the bass beat. Overall nice song, but improvements could still be made on this part.

Good. But improvements.

I think the song could do without the sweep and be replaced with something else. Or just a softer sweep. It seems your pads are overpowering the drums. I enjoy the drums in this one, and the pads and sweeps just push over it. I may be wrong, but it's hard to hear the song. I think you have a lot of overlapping frequencies.

I have spoke.

The beginning doesn't draw you in, as much as is needed. The first 5 seconds is where it's at, if someone is going to spend the time listening to what you put together. Otherwise, You've done a good job.. except he fact that it cuts out at the end, unprofessional at best; good thing you aren't pro yet :)

Keep working, and you'll be big.

~Apoc