Needs melody...

The beat is really good, I like the percussion and what not. I just think if you get a straightforward melody this so won't be bad. People may hear this song and just think "random noises", but that's not true. I've heard songs that ARE random noises, and this isn't one of them. I do, in fact, believe that this song was made well and with skill, but like I already said, i would like to hear a melody. But hey, not bad man! (BTW don't pay attention to people's mean reviews, they are just looking on the outside of the song.)
~Ice Master ><>

Not even 'plausible'

I'm sorry, but I don't hear anything in this song to tell you how to improve it, it's just a wretched jumble of notes.

make it better...

you can make it better by deleting it