Caaaaalming.
Vocals?!
You used vocals?!!
Good idea.
The synth got annoying, but this otherwise is great work.
You're getting better.
And when are you gonna be done the LOGO?!!
Author Comments
This is another trance song I've made. And compared to my other trance songs, this one is incredible. It's very calming and, what is that I hear? Omg! VOCALS! (of some sort)lol'd
Anyhoo, I'll shut up now. Enjoy! ^^
-Raigon
PS: sorry about the long intro in the song. I felt like it was needed. I've had a few people listen to the song already and half of them said loose the intro and half of them liked it cause it built up "tension" (whatever the hell that's supposed to mean. I think their looking for another word...)
Raigon50 responds:
LOGO?
oh yeah. crap. I forgot all about that.......
I'll get to work on it in about an hour. If you can, just pm me about what you wanted on it again.
Anywho, I finished an edited version of this song. It's a bit less repetitive and I added and fix the piano.
take it form xotix
basically THAT, and i have to say, techno/trance iare a really confining genres, so try and make songs under different genres.
and xotix kinda hit this one one the head, so to speak.
- make your own sounds (from presets if you have to)
- less repetititititivity (if your desperate, try and gradually add more drums to create some suspense so the choruses hit harder)
- personality in a song is a must, if it sounds like everything else, it IS everything else. add weird stuff (instruments, ambiance, composure) and make your song stand out for chrissakes.
Raigon50 responds:
The making my own sounds part is what i did. I edited some samples I had and used. The personality part is what gets me however. I wasn't trying to make this sound like anything else. I was just making the song up as I was working on it. If it did sound like something else, it was on accident.
name fits the song
The intro isn't long but repetative, maybe take off 0 - 0:13
some of the synths are too plain sounding like they were just taken from presets. Same goes for the sound packs. The kick is nice and the percussion altogether is good.
I think the piano could have been made a bit better and I don't really like the order of the last 2 notes in the piano melody.
Song is also a bit too repetitive and ending of the song could be better. take of that last ding at the end. It seems out of place.
Great vocals btw.
Song has great potential.
8/10 4/5
Raigon50 responds:
thanx for the feeback.
I thought the song was repetative, but when I went back to shorten it up, I couldn't decided on what to take out. I really don't have anything else to say, so I'll back and mess around with the 2 piano notes.
Credits & Info
You might also enjoy…
Raigon50 Licensing Terms
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
