getting there!

it's been a while since i checked, so i'm back.
You're making pretty decent progress, so keep it up!

it's nice and varied, and i liked what you did with percussion.
However there is no bass line in some bits. (you can get away with that just fine, but don't overdo it)
And like DjDekail said, your songs need some more structure, make sure you build up to a climax, then build that down towards the end, etc.

keep up the good stuff man (again, you're getting there!)

not realy my taste

but for a tech song it sounds good

My review..

..won't be as informative as DjDekail, mainly because I seem to be suffereing from the same thing you do.

You're not a bad musician by any means, all of your melodies flow together very well and listening i can understand that musically, you KNOW what you're doing.

It's eq'ing, mastering, and a lack of understanding of the genre that sets you behind. And even so, you're not bad, but not potentially your best.

Because I'm the same way.

But just to rebute your quote.

So you want honesty? Here comes a lenghty review..

OK where to start...
I would have liked to see some ping pong echo on the first synth to give a little more interest.
The addition of the drums in the way you did was nice. The the second synth was a nice addition. (:27)

At (:55) It should have built to a high point where the arped' synth was included. Going around a bar or 2 with that then adding the more paddy synth. (1:30) was a nice transition but the drums should have been building the whole time into another high point. The (2:18) synth could have been used elsewhere to add some more interest and things. (2:40) the drums should have grown into something larger and more interesting. Then flowing in the low point.

You could have then built into a high point to the end.

OR

Slowly cut out things until the end.

I think improvements could have been added. But the overall feel was good.
I'm gunna' review as Trance as thats what is was submitted as.

Just an opinion. Keep improving!