Needs more work
Not to bad
Author Comments
please i am working pretty hard on this one please let me know what you think i LOVE FEEDBACK I EAT IT FOR BREAKFAST NOM NOM NOM NOM!!!! :)
Honesty
I love seeing people try and use padding for main melodies, its very pretty.
You have some good melodic ideas but the hi-hat has got to go, it detracts from the main melody. Also you need to throw in more atmosphere, you have one synth playing, and like 2 samples with one bass synth sounding thing. Make more go on, and don't be afraid to raise things up an octave!
I like the melody though, very sad sounding. Keep working on it!
poptarts47 responds:
appreciate the insight got rid of those damn hihats once somone said. thanks again
Credits & Info
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- Downloads
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- Score
- Waiting for 3 more votes
- Uploaded
- Dec 24, 2009
- 8:42 PM EST
- Genre
- Ambient
- File Info
- Song
- 911.1 KB
- 59 sec
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