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I love how in every one of your songs I've heard so far has a positive message to it unlike most mainstream rap songs which are about gang banging, drugs, sex and money. great lyrics.
Okay, first off, I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT HAPPENED TO THE VOICES. Something must've gone horribly wrong in the mixing process which makes the voices sound really weird.
Anyhow, this is the last track Master Namaste and I did together. We got it, start to finish, in about 3 hours or so.
Beat is original. Just somethin diff I tried.
Hook:
Life is in the eye of who beholds it
Does the rosebush have thorns or the thornbush have roses?
You can see many stars in the darkness, but you'll notice
We can all attain enlightenment look at the Sun and focus.
Verse order:
Me: 1, hook
MN: 2
If you vote, please rate and review! Especially if you 0 bomb this track. I'd like to know why.
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I love how in every one of your songs I've heard so far has a positive message to it unlike most mainstream rap songs which are about gang banging, drugs, sex and money. great lyrics.
Mainstream rap feeds into the primal, carnal nature that we all carry inside us. My goal is to show that there's more to life than that! :D
Why the hell aint this on top 5?
We have shit on top 5 and we have your epic song sittin here? WTF this is wrong bro, we need to fight the AP!!
Lol thanks man. There's nothin wrong with bein underground though...
Finally...
a track I can review everything on:
+Poe: Great lyricism. "Does the rosebush have thorns or the thornbush have roses?" <- hellz ya!
+Namaste: He kills it with those first couple of bars, Im liking those rhymes. He's got more expression too.
+Beat: Basic but serves its purpose perfectly. Just has a great mood for ya'll to groove with. Keep trying that, it works!
The vocals don't sound that bad, you can tell that they are "watered" down a bit.
-What the fuck is with the odd millisecond vocal clips that dont quite fade out or clip. Listen at 1:56 for example.
the clips are breathing from the sample. err.... I mean... they're really watered down crash cymbals in reverse... yeah.... XD
[KOA]
..poe..
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.