Just Okay......

This was a start, you could have put a little more effort into it and the song gets repetitive after about 12 seconds. Keep working hard. -dantastic202

You definately have potential

You certainly have potential, no doubt about that. or should i say we? WHATS UP?? ok i know a comment is the way to greet someone but who cares? got any new songs yet? ok then dont forget to menchine the myspace thing. ok ttyl

If you have to say it's awesome...

It probably isn't. Work a little on diversifying your sound within the piece. And stop bragging- your music should do that for itself.

One of your better ones

Well, I think that you should go from making unserious stuff to serious, because you certainly have talent, just need to enfold yourself to creating good music.

The song is one of your better ones.

umm...

the loops are offbeat from each other, sounds crappy