I like it but...
This aint industrial... this is miscellaneous or better yet, techno... its not got enough distortion in the beat to be industrial nor the patterns necessary, And although i like the peice it just needs to be submitted correctly, then it'd get a 9/10 and a 4/5 not a 7/10 and a 3/5.
Just a thought I had the same issues with a song previously ^_^
-Dave-
...FC...