Pity..

This piece has the potential to be a great work of art. But it doesn't live up to this potential. One of the problems I'm having with this piece is that the intro is a bit too long and the vocal has some unnecissary repeats which make it sound a bit annoying. Furthermore, when the song actually starts. It's just to slow for what, I'm my opinion, the listener is anticipating. I'd love to see an improvement on this piece, because I really think it could be very good.

Kind regards,
MarioArt

haha

niceee xD
i like it + i like the melody a lot :D
5ed

btw, wanna check out my first try at DnB ( still wip)? vote & review then ^^