nice
it's great, every thing mixes well. i really like the vocals, they go amazing with the anger that comes with this song.
This is a verrry old song (written when I was 13). I'm making an album of old songs re-recorded, so this doesn't show off my musical ability, but does show off my sexy new mix.
It's currently instrumental because I don't like doing vocals. I shall do at some point, the song is meant to have them, but I'm tired right now and I want to go to bed.
If anybody wants to have a crack at doing them, please be my guest. I'd love to hear it!
UPDATE 28/02/10: Vocals added, mixed slightly better. I shall add a download link for the album when it's done (which should be Tuesday).
UPDATE: 03/03/10: ALBUM FINISHED! Download Scattered Fragments of a Past Forgotten, a collection of old songs by me re-recorded, including this song as well as 5 others, for free from here:
http://www.jamendo.com/en /album/62448
Lyrics:
I hope you writhe and you cry
Light a fire inside my mind to burn away this desire
I hope your scream and bleed
Because what's right for you is right for me
Can't you see?
I am a machine
Bleed for me
One day, you'll writhe and you'll cry.
nice
it's great, every thing mixes well. i really like the vocals, they go amazing with the anger that comes with this song.
Thank-you, brother! Download the album, 'tis out now! :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.