Sing a song D&B remix[WIP]

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Sing a song D&B remix[WIP]

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I need feed back, I really feel like random little things are missing. I want to know what people think og it thus far, where I can improve, etc.

[Work in progress]

Also, could you guys please leave comments? I would like to know what you think, just voting doesn't help. (Especially people who vote low..)

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megakill

2010-01-24 06:06:07

Hmm, i know what you mean..

Firstly, im sorry about only giving six stars, its not that i didnt like it, i just know what you mean about feeling that theres little things missing.

I like how you've brought the drums in, but i felt like you maybe should have let it run a little longer before you took everything out for the "dont worry that its not good enough" sample.

You could possibly try adding more of a bass line after it drops, to give it more of a low end.
The atmosphere it captures is really good, kinda creepy. The samples you've cut work really well.
It annoyed me a bit that its only 1:06, but then its still a work in progress, so thats probably not anything to worry about because it'll be longer by the time you finish.

It felt a little empty towards the end, so you could also try playing around with that, adding another melody maybe?

Anyway, these just some thoughts i had, im really looking forward to hearing the final version, i think its gonna be a pretty damn good tune.

SonicJ responds:

Yeah, I def will change the "sing a song " choirs, I felt it was too early after repeatedly listening to it. I did add another bass in the version im working on, whether or not it will work for everyone else to hear is up in the air. In the version im working on, I added some bells as well, and more drum layers with more sing a song samples. I have to cut each individual sample from the song, since it's tempo did not work for the song , but that's simple to do. I'll be sure to message you in the event that I upload another WIP version of this song, or the final version. I might take a while to make this, I' give my self up to a week since that how long it seems to take most great songs on NG.

Also, no hard feelings about the 6, no need to apologize :D

TNT52527

2010-01-24 02:50:40

OMG!!!!!

Man, this is a good song.

SonicJ responds:

you think so :D?? Yay!

PixelCake

2010-01-24 01:19:39

Wicked

This is wicked cool. It's almost a little creepy. Maybe a song you'd hear during a nightmare sequence in a very modern horror film. Please finish this.

SonicJ responds:

Thats the new aim, night mare type song, thanks :D