why's every one giving so low?

This is good stuff. I'm not saying its the best stuff in the world, but fours? This deserves at least a six. And 5 is saying it's bad. Any ways, good job.

Umm, ok

The beats are just a tic off, if the beats at the beginning were like .1 milliseconds more togethor it would have sounded great.

Not enough insterments but it sounds good

Yes, it is indeed techno

Originality: No one has ever put a gunshot into their music.

Diversity: It's the same thing over and over.

Clarity: There's two instruments. A little too simple perhaps?

Effort: *Points at last two*

A few things to improve the beat..

Hey! I was just listening to this trance.. and I think if you slowed down the main beat so it sounded less "boom boom" the song would have more depth and clarity.. and quite possibly sound even better than it already is! Keep trying, decent effort.