'Caine King

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Well, after a whole two weeks of planning (playing Call of Duty) me and a friend of mine decided to start recording, even though he didn't contribute his own voice. The script is, at best, mediocre, and this is my first time voice acting so please try not to be so harsh. But i don't want you to be too soft(who am I kidding, it's Newgrounds) I would really like some honest, constructive criticism. Andddddd, that's about it. :)

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FatKidWitAJetPak

2010-05-31 22:21:49

FINAL VOICE ACTING COMPETITION -5- RESULTS!

***At the end of the contest, this entry was not submitted to Newgrounds on time. Therefore, it is disqualified from the contest since not all judges were able to judge. Here are my scores, however, for the authors personal benefits.***

FINAL SCORE FROM ME: 75

Your microphone seems to be very clear. Your acting is to monotone, however, but with improvement you could make some great recordings with quality like that. You should have included some music in the background to spicen up some things. These voices did seem different from eachother, so you seem to have a nice range. You even had some mixing in there where the woman talked in the background. The woman actually seemed to have some nice acting. The monotone voice of the dark guy seemed to well... fit his character. He laughed a bit, seemed serious, wasn't that bad really. Especially since this is your first voice acting skit, I must say you have some great capabilities. You should work on making your acting a bit more EXCITING. Get really into the characters and try and make your voice a bit louder and more in depth. Good luck man.

Acting 25/35
Fit 18/25
Range 14/15
Originality 10/15
Mixing 8/10
Total 75/100

*Chris your breaking my heart*

Danimalz responds:

Lol thanks a lot! I honestly am new to this so I didn't know what to expect. And goddamn it took you a freakin long time to judge this.
"WAHHH I HAVE SCHOOLLLLL!!!!"
Ha but I am grateful you took the time to judge it even if it was (or wasn't) late.

XDKingdom

2010-04-05 23:32:49

That sounded good.

Reminds me of that guy everyone knows that tells stories and has seen some damn good stuff in every action movie.

Danimalz responds:

Haha thanks! That's definitely the kind of voice I was going for.

TheYanjo

2010-03-06 19:12:20

Cool!

Low volume though...

Danimalz responds:

Thanks! Yea, I'm not too sure what happened, but I'll need to fix that.

PastryMan

2010-02-15 23:29:21

Right okay good

I wish I understood it. But damn, did it sound good to my ears.

Danimalz responds:

I'm glad you liked it. Yea, the script is a little cryptic and yes, the volume is low but I am just a budding voice actor, eager to appreciate all that is to be offered. But I digress. Scrapyard.