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ddue this was like matrix sweet stuffs

all yo stuff is nice yo

I have acid reflux and it desn't sound like that.

It is way too repetitive. In fact, most of your stuff is. You have a lot of diversity, but it seems you just stick to one pattern and use it thrughout the whole entire song. You will get much better scores and reviews if you spend some more time creating variations.

better, u get a 4

also a good example of what u can do, now if u wanna make something really cool, ull first read this review, 2nd, ull remake this song, because first, it rocks, except for almost half of it which is super repetitive and is the exact same thing, take what u have and redo it into a longer, changing song... then ill vote on it 5 everyday till its number 1