Great song

meloncholic melody.

Great!

I love this. Great chording and melody on top, very moody. The bridge in the middle with the dissonant tones is fantastic and really adds to the emotion of this. The only criticism I can think of is to maybe add a little bit of effect to the upper ranged notes on the 2nd verse where the higher notes sound a little weak. Also the arpeggios on the bridge start a little draggy on timing, but then it straightens out. Might be nice with a subtle lo-fi drum beat with a slight delay on them to keep the timing better. If you don't do anything more to this it still stands on its own as a beautiful song and well made.

nice!

there's a little note there hiding that i don't think it belongs there. the chorus is nice in my opinion, the muting part is ok, and it also got that tocatta thing going on, and the multiple guitar sounds coming in...the song seems like a little empty at parts...but overall, if you change the note i'm telling you about maybe it would get a lot better for the ears....i could try helping with the guitar play if you would like, i'm not great at all, but if you'd like to send me the backing track, maybe i can do a little solo, and you could make another version feat.hamzawy, i'm free, just pm me anytime tim. i think you've got something nice, but need a little hand, like me too. nice job.