I understand that this was one of your first songs so I want rate too harshly. But starting at 0:13 the bass doesn’t seem to match up with the rest of the song. The piano at 1:15 just seems really unnecessary, however I did like the new instrument introduced at 2:38 since it added a bit more variation to the track.
Overall it’s just too empty, but I’m glad to see how big of an improvement you’ve made over the years :)