The Drum Kit is the shiz-nit but...
... man...... you still need to clean this up a bit...
It seems you don't enough time for other rhythms to flow into the song, it's as if you threw it in there. And the music that comes along the drums should be raised just a bit higher. I'm sure you'll catch what I mean, you're so close to a master piece yet so far...
... Please, remix. Or try again.
-Casp-