yup
I have to say this: put more sound in that guitar - especially to the end. I disappointed in the ending because I thought that the ending had more louder guitar. It can be suitable in this song.
Don't use your eyes you'll see right through
don't use your mind because your thoughts mislead you
Don't search
don't plea
only then may you find me
I am the color in between
loose track of time and loose the doubt
Don't use your ears because the sound will drown me out
Don't search
don't plea
and through the stillness you will see
I've got everything you need
Turn off the phone shut down the screen
don't act your way into another worthless scene
Don't search
don't plea
only then may you find me
I am the color in between
loose your mind, loose the routine
Don't turn like gears in some indifferent machine
Don't search
don't plea
and through the stillness you will see
We've got everything we need
yup
I have to say this: put more sound in that guitar - especially to the end. I disappointed in the ending because I thought that the ending had more louder guitar. It can be suitable in this song.
good
That was perfect rhyme and beat nice job
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