Could use a few backround effects

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was not bad, i kinda like it but does seem like it could use some changes and fixes for the better infact it would sound better with some special effects in the backround these are some ideas just too mix around and dont really want to take away from what you are trying to do with this piece but it does need some little fixes and changes wich will in the longrun make it more better and much improved so try some effects and other stuff for the better, untill then good luck on your next one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i mentioned a few changes like some effects just a few little things here and there wouldnt hurt, and maybe even make it abit better

Perfect

This song is exactly what every other House song on NG should be aiming to make. I'm sick of Electro House. Sick of it! It's all people make here now. It's cold, heartless and not to mention the fact that every noise in it makes you want to rip your ears off.

This song, everything about it expresses feeling, emotion. The melody speaks without a voice, because it doesn't need one. I want you to know that music like this gives me hope for Newgrounds. It's full of gold if you dig deep enough, and that gold is so valuable that me must keep it alive.

Thank you for this. Favourited.

Amazing!

I'm getting that smooth, cool house feeling. I wasn't digging those snare rolls though, not very housey. Very nice track!

Great track!

A really good track! I wish i could hear this kind of track in a snowboardmovie! i would fit right in! hehe^^ Keep up the good work man! And thank you for posting your songs here ;*

Not bad

I think that you made this song overly simple here - it wasn't a bad sound, but it did need something else to take it forward, as opposed to these loops that were holding it all together. Perhaps more instruments, a change of pitch for a loop and some other little variations would help this tracks longevity and the fact that it starts to get repetitive after a short while.

With the way that it sounds, you haven't done a bad job at all with the beat, so it's just the melody that needs the tweaks, so I'm sure you can do something that will bring this up to speed, so to speak.

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