A complete version of a previous song i submitted. Hope you like it.
Good stuff here dude.
Great stuff, really. One problem, like Seiat is sayin'. You gotta trash out the weird shit. It was great stuff, gettin right into the tune, then out of freakin now where! The song just...dies?! Low blow, that wasn't needed at all.
hmm. ill see, my friend. i made this as an experiment and im glad i get to learn something.
It was great!!
That is, it was great until it hit 52 seconds. The beat you have is fucking awesome, but seriously, what's with the tacky crap in the middle? No offense, but it felt like it was something thrown in at the last second to finish the song, and sounded totally out of place.
It was like you were getting right into it, then between 50 seconds to 52 it was breaking down into an awesome low key, only to go into something that completely throws you off and ruins the the mood. Wtf man, it made my ears want to scream. This beat has way more potential.
Get rid of that weird, awful turnaround, or replace it with something more suitable(maybe finish that low key bit), and all my 5 are belong to this. It sounds great after 1:16, but that bit betweeon 0:52 and 1:16 just ruins the tune. Sorry to be the one to bear the bad news, but honestly I think you could do so much better and turn this into an amazing piece of work. Stick with the original beat, and you can't go wrong.
actually in a way youre right. but i kinda threw this whole thing together at the last minute. i thought the tacky shit would make the song more of a dance tune rather than epicness. but thx for the advice ill be sure to use it later.
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Cool. I used to like Techno, but now I have a better love for Trance... Anyway, the difference between Trance and Techno is, well, Trance is somewhat louder, and Techno has more drums than anything.
i see. i guess i can see that. thx bro.
Blood!
Severe track :))))
Ps: this is Techno
anyway good job!
man. i can never distinguish the difference. thx though.
hmmm
Perhaps my mind did not enjoy but my body reacted cong yout trance is not bad
lol. What?
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