Oh My War (fixed)

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Oh My War (fixed)

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Since putting a song like this into the heavy metal category is a sin, this is the next best category. Fixed the sound of the guitar, still needs the vocals and some parts redone on guitar, get rid of some of the fadeouts.... blah blah

Ratings would be nice, reviews would be rad though!

Peace!

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Tjmoe44

2010-03-03 21:10:23

nice

love it its perfect hope this makes it into best ever bro

death-is-forever responds:

That's what I want to hear. :D Next song will be better, just wait. :D

TrillWill

2010-03-03 20:15:33

Best of Both Worlds...

Sounds like good vs evil

Hard and soft sounds sound great

I also agree the guitar is a bit distorted and the end is off sync

other than that it's a great beat...

please check out my "Epic Theme Song" I made. You can review if you want

death-is-forever responds:

Appreciate it man, it's a VERY rough demo of the song. So the redone version will be so much better. Thanks again, I'll keep your guy's suggestions in mind.

Dig1talDam4g3

2010-03-03 19:45:38

Dang.. Hardcore.

Great song, in my opinion it gets much better at around 0:55, but that's just my opinion.

Ok, so I'm one of the few people on NG that actually listen to the entire song before placing my vote and review. Here's what I have to say.

The Good: The song seems to be really well thought out and sounds very interesting to listen to. The guitar has a deep resounding energy that gives the song a somewhat dark tint. (which I like)

The Bad: I think that the distortion is a little too much, maybe slightly less distortion, and to me it would sound much better if you had brought the guitar forward a little more, the Song at around 1:20 just enthralls me, and would sound much better if the guitar was slightly less distorted (slightly, very slightly). Also, at around 2:10 to the end is kinda out of sync with the voice effect, and i feel that if it was calibrated a little bit more it would give the song a much better feel

That is all :] good song too, I wasn't trying to bash it or nething, please don't take my review that way :\

Also, if you have the chance listen to my upload and review it please... I need some feedback.

death-is-forever responds:

Hardcore is where my heart is. :P

Thanks man, I really appreciate it, this was all done at 2 in the morning a few days ago just for fun, so it's not perfect yet, and I would agree with you on everything you said. So thanks for the review and the pointers. I'll be sure to check out your submission soon.