Mesmerizing

Awesome start to what could become my favorite song of all time! Perfect choice of instruments, perfect choice of effects. But remember always to keep your bass on or else it can lead to some awkward moments. but what happened at 0:24 to 0:28? seems you may have put the cut off to low or may of muted an instrument. Try using a little sweep effect and master your transitions. Be sure to spend allot of time on this one because this one has quite a bit of potential! Oh and also, almost forgot, try making some instruments sound more distant and maybe add some effects on the drums. messing around with grossbeat and reverb is always a good idea for me!

needs to be longer :P

VERY good for a preview. looking forward to the full song. honestly i dont really have anything bad to say about this song

(but the song came in strong and scared the crap out of me haha)

5/5 9/10 (waiting for full song to download)

good start

Strengthen that bass line, switch that snare for one with more bang, accentuate the hi-hat sound, and you've got yourself an awesome WIP to come home to. keep it up.