Interesting...

Definetely an interesting intro, with nice melodies and varied FX which helped to catch the attention of the user immiedetely. Drums in the intro were quite good too, but they did get slightly repetitive after a while.

Unfortunately, there didnt seem to be any sort of a main section, this just sounds like a prolonged intro, building up and up but never reaching the peak and then suddenly stopping. I'd suggest making this longer and opening up a main section that actually contains some different synths and melodies.

As far as atmoshpere, it wasnt bad, depth was decent and harmonizing was quite good. What i would like though would be if there were some changing synths in the background to give some variety.

Overall, not a bad loop, and it looped quite well too. However, id make it longer and introduce some more variety into it. Other then that, good work...

Darklight17
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Nice song, but...

It's too repetitive at the end!! The song is very short, and the end gets too repetitive, it is a nice song to listen, but it's for when you're doing another things, it's great to listen as an ambient song...

The song is pretty short, so, I have nothing to say about it, just that the music has a nice beat and the drums were very cool, it had a nice fitting, bt the music gets way too repetitive while you listen to it... That's why I gave you a 7...

Anyways, it's a nice song to listen to, I kind of liked it, the only problem is the repetitions and the lenght... Improve it, man, it'd awesome.
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Roger

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The start of it is very interesting, though the cohesion that starts seeping through by 0:20 gets a little distracted by some of the other synths, such as the one that slides up the scale a little (heard at 0:50 and a lot of times besides), and the drum beat in general. It's a good beat, and the drum sounds are nice with a level that means it doesn't grate at all, but it seems a little unrelated? I don't know.

As well as that, the main harmonic synth as well just felt a little...off? Like, it was ALMOST tonal, but not totally there, and it kind of bridged an awkward gap between vaguely-ethereal and unsettling, and it was something which the other synths didn't really help resolve all that much. On its own, there's a but of a quirky peace to it...when you've got the drum and bass added in as well, the entire image the track's projecting just seems a little confused.

There's a lot of good sounds throughout, but I think they never really came together in a totally cohesive way...maybe if the track was longer, and you had more time to explore the possibilities of the synths instead of just essentially repeating the same things, this would be remedied, but as it is I'm left just a little confused as to what your intentions were for this piece. If you were going for a kind of unsettling creepishness, I think that's accomplished, but in general it could use editing just to give that mood more of a confirmation in the piece.

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Something deper there...

I'm not entirely sure what sort of mindset you're trying to provoke with this. There is a feeling of tense tranquillity in the melody, but the bass beat does make this more of a scared one, because it does it's best to take away from the serenity of the whole piece together.

With the way that you've portrayed this, I don't particularly view this as a bad thing. It does make the two parts clash something rotten and as a result, you do end up with some mystery to the piece, which is certainly interesting and a talking point, to say the least.

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Too repetitive

Even though the song is quite short it gets repetitive towards the end.

While the intro sounds very promising and I really like the effects you used throughout the song it still isn't enough to keep me interested all the way until the end.

I think you should try to break up the main melody every now and then with different parts. That way you would make the song longer and less repetitive at the same time.

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