Good start....thhen wtf.

the strings had too slow of an attack to start the song off. And when the sax....which doesnt really belong in hip hop in the first place...came in the delay was even more present. Yeah...ok what the hell did you do to this song. It was fine in the beginning. Then you made it symphonic or something....and then a synth came in which sounded like it was being played by a cat or some shit like that. Stop the madness please. One more thing...granted this is hip hop...which happens to be the worst genre of music ever... you really need to switch the drum beat around, so its not repetitive. This one gave me a good laugh...thank you