To light for my tastes
Well, I have rated this according to music, not personal taste, This song has to light and SUPER repetitive cymbal beat for me, and the song just seems like its lacking a layer somewhere, BUT that is for the music I like, otherwise, you song works very well for light trance, you didn't use a crap ton of reverb to make everything sound Super spacy ( except the beggining )
My main note, PLEASE change up that Hi Hat line, its obnoxiously annoying and please at 0:27 where you have the FX kick, PLEASE get rid of it, it has NO place in this song, it sounds completely out of place. Use a much less reverbed kick, maybe add a vocal, or a sweep the lingering then SUDDEN effect you have there sounds good now, but for re listen ability it needs to be more interesting, and needs to lead into a heavier louder