Decent
I`m not too big on your vocals, but the music is nice. The vocals were a little loud, but the guitar was also a little quite in my opinion. The synth should be brought out a little bit too, it seems hidden.
Author Comments
Pulled this one out of a drawer in my room, put some music to it, and here it is.
This thing is from Freshman Year. The girl that wanted me to write her a song got on my nerves, so this is what I wrote her. Enjoy!
-Tim
LYRICS:
You showed me what it's like
to feel helpless when we fight
you broke me down, you shot me apart
I couldn't get out of the dark
I struggled through life
I've seen you cry
You took it out on me
And all I can say is
Im not sorry, cant hurt me anymore
Im not guilty, for anything you blame me for
Im not sorry for all I put you through
Im not guilty cuz your guilty too
Everyone says Ive changed
Not on my own but through your rage
They say they miss the old you
And all I can say is I do too
I gave up a lot for you
and all I did you blindly saw through
With every thankless gift I give
You make me wonder how you can live
Im not sorry, cant hurt me anymore
Im not guilty, for anything you blame me for
Im not sorry for all I put you through
Im not guilty cuz your guilty too
guitaraddict4791 responds:
All good ideas. Like i said below, a ten minute mix job. But I'll definitely do that.
Nice.
You should maybe bring your voice to a lower octave or something. Idk that's all the suggestions I have. lol
Keep it up.
guitaraddict4791 responds:
I would drop the octave...if i could sing that low. But Im juggling the life of a senior with a job also lol, I gotta take my time next time. Thanks for the listen
pretty cool
I like this, pretty cool sound, you should re-mix and bring the vocal level down, they almost overpower the music. you have talent.
guitaraddict4791 responds:
yeah probably. It was a ten minute mix job. I'll redo it and re-up it. Thanks for listening
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- 6:10 PM EDT
- Genre
- General Rock
- File Info
- Song
- 3.3 MB
- 3 min 35 sec
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