This is the first single released by my fictional band, BallPark Pirates.

The original melody came from a tiny loop that won me a game of "ten minute music doodle". Granted, the other two consisted of one being a slow, harsh beat of a buzz tone repeating alone for twenty seconds, and the other a bland, singular rhythm with a four-note melody and a spastic, flailing keyboard mash somewhere in the middle.

I love you guys, OddGuy, bobthepen. You know I do.

Anyway, I decided. I would do something with that little guy. So here he is. Yes, I know it's potentially unfavorably comparable to saturninity, but on the other hand, YOU'VE NEVER HEARD SOMETHING SO AWESOME!

LYRICS (I can't unhear them.) :

SAAAAAAILING THE SEAAAAAAAS ON A HOOOOTDOOOOOOOOG
PIIIIIIIIIIIIICKLES AND MUUUUUUUSTARD AND CHEEEEEEEEEEESE

Being old to the liking and making music thing and new to the sharing music with other people thing, I'm looking for constructive criticism. In my opinion, I have all the right legos, but my tower's full of holes. I'd like some advice.