eh.

This really isn't a song so much as a random collection of riffs.

8 measures of the same boring snare/hihat action... twice? I think there's a kick in there but the drums are so poorly recorded I can't hear it. There needs to be some serious variation in the drums. Have him add some fills or something for the love of god.

A bunch of random riffs with no connection thrown together does not make a song, as I said. You need to do something so we're not listening to what are really a few different 4 measure riffs over and over again. It's boring. Add some lead guitar or some vocals or something.

Make sure your shit transitions well instead of just brickwalling into a new part of the song.

Nothing new..

The whole song is a great big "Meh, whats the point?", the bass in the beginning really built up to some heavy metal, but then the guitars came in and it turned out it was the same pop-punk thing we all have heard 1000 times before.
It was all just a collection of riffs nothing really made sense...