Ohh
A story track? This is something I've never seen in the audio portal before. There isn't even a proper genre for this, lol.
Well, as far as the audio track is concerned, it's a nice little tune. Perfect for a game, most likely an RPG, and I can totally imagine paging through character dialogue. It looks like you've provided the dialogue for us to read as well, lol. I don't really understand the story at all, I'll be honest. Maybe you should number your tracks? (1of5) or something like that so people don't start in the wrong place. Without the numbers it's just impossible to figure out where to begin with how many tracks you have.
Anyway, maybe that's not what you were going for, it just looks like it. Good track overall. Nothing I'd listen to voluntarily, but I think it would be absolutely perfect for an RPG.