EQ needs major work

Nothing is upfront enough for this to sound good. The playing is pretty nice though, but the recording really butchers it. If you are using a program to edit it, you may want to use compression and proper EQ to help bring things up front. The ending is also pretty bad and I suggest you just think of a new ending.

Also I know this is a demo, but a demo is supposed to really show us that we want to hear the full version, so even a demo must sound nice and crisp and upfront.

Good work on playing the guitars though.