your right the genre doesnt fit.

however you do have potential. Try a faster bmp. And although all music has an element of repetition, the way you used it was a little too much. try having a heavier beat and master the whole thing better. Since this is your first i give you a 9. im going to fav you to watch your progress. Oh yeah one more thing, doent change the synths you used in this song, but make a better backround track. you had the right idea, but it lacked some unknoen element i cant describe.

Angels gone rogue
- DJ Chaos