Shit.
Hey, finish this shit. My ex just destroyed my heart, and this is nice. Great voice for this btw.
Author Comments
not the full song....something my friend and i are working on.
he made the beat...i provided some quick vocals in about 15 minutes too see how it all sounded. hopefully we can finish this for a mixtape we are working on before i get out high school.
but enjoy none the less!
sample- Bill Withers - Ain't No Sunshine
Wow!! 10/10!!
Niceeee :)
It is really good! 10/10
Make it longer please?
I would have a complete two sentences from the refrain in there: Ain't no sunshine when she is gone ain't no war when she is away.
And add a same size verse after that then repeat the refrain again Bridge to last refrein and end with repeat refrein.
Then it is a solid complete song and shit i would buy this if it was in a store!
10/10 5/5
Nice
Hey hit me up we can make a track or two nice vocals
Wurd
It sounds good, solid quality. I'd work on a more diverse rhyme scheme and cadence though. More internal rhymes!!
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4.86 / 5.00
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- Hip Hop - Olskool
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- 44 sec
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