sounds ok

it sounds ok, but since it's not finished i might help you to get something better out of it.

You might try to make the fade-overs-some longer, it will have a more abientisch feel to it than, but it makes the song more "complete" to say, especialle at .27, if the fade out is just a little bit longer, and that other cool bridge comes in slower ( also make the "loops" longer) it will really fall into place.

and jeah, it sounds ok, so with some improvements it'll sound awesome.