Too short, bad quality, no god.

The track was waaay too short, i would have liked it more if it were longer and was a little less repetitive.

Bad quality recording... i heard a stutter a few times and i noticed that you were clipping alot...

No god, Have yo remember there are alot of Athiests, Buddhists, Hindus, Muslims, and Pagans... If you put something down as "God this" and "God that"... not everyone's gonna like that stuff.

Just keep that into consideration.

Pretty :)

The song is very pretty. I could see it transforming to a VERY epic song if you keep working with it. However, there are a few problems...

The overall volume is very loud; turn it down a bit. Also, it doesn't loop very well. It jumps toward the end, but I'm not sure if this is a demo of a full song or a loop since it is not classified as a loop :P

Keep working with it. This could be a very good song! :)