"While listening to this I pictured a battle scene from the game Aveyond and it really does sound like battle music! Not much to say for 14 seconds but here it is anyway."

Heh, you still manage to make a good review on just 14 seconds, thanks :D.

"What you have now works very well as long as more comes afterward. This alone being repeated wouldn't work very well, but obviously you know that since it's a WiP. I think you should make some higher instruments have a part later on to make it interesting. You could make another melody later on or keep this one with different instruments, either way would work fine. Lastly, maybe a little faster, maybe."

Good ideas, especially for the high instruments thing. I'll probably add a pan-flute or something, making this whole thing sound like MGS3 xD. I'll definitely be varying the melodies more too.

"The backgrounds were really good, as were the percussion and pretty much everything else. Again, I wouldn't change anything that you already have except maybe, just maybe, the speed. The short blasts were a nice touch that I think totally make this work."

Alright, glad you liked it. The short blasts are orchestral hits along with a crash cymbal, I just love adding them in my songs :P.

"You, sir, know how to make battle songs. It could work in any game I've ever played. Nice!"

Thank you :3. Glad you enjoyed it!

OK man, this comment is pretty vague. What do you mean by 'the whole string thing'. I only had strings in the background :S.

Also, if you say that the percussion wasn't bad, you could at least tell me how to fix it, in your opinion.

Well thanks for the review anyway.